Week 3 Audit: Reading a control-loop pitch

A mechanical/clerical audit --- practising on an industry framed as a simple control-loop task, and checking whether that framing holds

8 March 2027

The pitch calls long-haul driving a control-loop task — hold a lane, hold a speed. That framing is doing work before the breaking-changes section ever gets a say: it already defines the job as the part a machine is good at. The audit skill this week is noticing a framing move before you get to the evidence that contradicts it.

Before the session#

Bring one sentence from the pitch where the industry’s task is defined narrowly enough that the “efficient” comparison becomes easy to win.

In the session#

Group read-through of the pitch’s opening framing, then a check against the functional breaking-changes section: does it describe a part of the job the pitch’s framing already excluded?

Afterwards#

Log this week’s framing move in your Weekly Audit Log — it’s a pattern worth watching for in every notice from here on, including the one you’ll write yourself.