Script and Storyboard#
Week 9 · SLOP8760#
Phase 3 of 4 · Holding It Together
This week adds#
A beat sheet, a hook, and a storyboard: the three documents that turn held shots into something long enough to call an episode.
States, not transitions#
“The rival arrives uninvited” is a state a shot can show. “Then things get tense” is a feeling, and leaves the storyboard guessing.

The opening is a published window#
3seconds to introduce the content proposition
A vertical episode is watched thumb-first, and the default action is to keep scrolling. TikTok’s own creative guidance puts the hook in the first six seconds and the proposition inside the first three.
Source: TikTok Ads Manager Help, creative best practices — https://ads.tiktok.com/help/article/creative-best-practices
The percentage of times viewers stayed to watch past the initial seconds of a Short
YouTube Help, “Stayed to watch”
Source: YouTube Help, Understand your YouTube content performance — https://support.google.com/youtube/answer/12220281
The storyboard is a shot list#
The recorded tier three names a size, a duration and a camera for every entry. S8, 0.0 to 4.0 s, medium, slow push-in. S9, 4.0 to 7.0 s, close-up on the hand and the stake. S10, 7.0 to 12.0 s, medium side profile, static.
Source, for the shot-list vocabulary: Bordwell, Thompson & Smith, Film Art, 13th ed. — https://www.mheducation.com/highered/product/film-art-introduction-bordwell-thompson/M9781264296095.html
Source, for the shot numbers and timings: this course’s own recorded run — src/data/studio/inputs/week09/t3.md
Pick one device on purpose#
Mystery, conflict in progress, visual anomaly, or direct address. A shot trying to be all four earns none of them.

The ladder#
The same two-to-three-shot sequence, four ways.
- A prose paragraph, with no shot breakdown at all
- That paragraph as a beat sheet written in states
- Plus a shot list, with a size named for every shot
- Boarded with keyframes, each tagged to the reference it must match
Before class#
Sketch, in a few lines, the premise your storyboard will cover — the prose-paragraph tier of this week’s ladder.
This week’s exercise#
Turn that paragraph into all four ladder tiers for the same two-to-three shot sequence: the paragraph itself, a beat sheet in states, a beat sheet with a sized shot list, and a boarded version with keyframes tagged to their references. Bring all four tiers to Wednesday’s Dailies.
Reading#
TikTok: creative best practices for performance ads
TikTok
Introduce your content proposition in the first 3 seconds for better recall and awareness
YouTube Help: get started creating YouTube Shorts
YouTube
short-form videos that are up to 3 minutes long
YouTube Help: understand your content performance
YouTube
The percentage of times viewers stayed to watch past the initial seconds of a Short
Film Art: An Introduction, 13th ed.
Bordwell, Thompson & Smith2026
The Relation of Shot to Shot: Editing
Pixar in a Box: the art of storytelling
Khan Academy
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